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Rabu, 23 November 2011

COPYWRITING


1.   TELKOMSEL
Begitu Dekat Begitu Nyata”
It means no matter where we are, how far it is, we can still keep in touch with our family, right ? Well, obviously the quality of the signal is excellent, we admit that. So maybe if we’re in the middle of a forest, we still can communicate with our family if it is possible. But ….
1st Telkomsel is not an inexpensive kind of provider. Usually the businessman or a worker who use this provider. We barely see a student use Telkomsel, usually most of them use another provider which is cheaper. So, not all the people use it.
2nd If the signal go worse, usually it drives me mad. Because sometimes it takes 2 or 3 days to fix the problem with the signal it self. But it’s not always anyway.
The conclusion is….. The jingle and the reality is not really fit each other.

2.   XL
“XLalu Lebih Baik”
It means this  provider is trying to develop to be better, from the signal side and service. The calling cost and the text cost is free, but it’s only in their community and in the new card, it’s no longer provided in the old card. And sometimes, in some areas, we don’t get the signal. The other weakness is the old card user can’t enjoy the new facilities in the new card. According to us, XL develops to be better than before. So, the jingle itself fits each other.

3.   Nokia
“Connecting People”
Nokia is famous brand until now,especially in Indonesia. So, the quality is proved. Nokia has many types and provides so many complete features. The user becomes easier to interact with other people.
The conclusion is what is mentioned in nokia’s jingle is proved because most of people in Indonesia use Nokia.



4.   Axis
“Baik Ya….”
Axis card is usually used in teenage, because of there cheap cost. Besides it fits their pocket money. But the signal is weak. It’s got the high signal in some areas, not all. And sometimes, the text message is pending and it’s quite difficult to make a call.

And this is the strengths and the weakness of Axis card.
The strengths are : the text cost is cheap. And if we call the same provider, it’s free.
The weaknesses are : low signal, if we want to access the internet. It needs so long.
So, we conclude that axis is good enough and yeah .. Axis baik yah .


5.       SMARTFREN
“I Hate Slow”
It means that Smartfren isn’t slow or it’s fast to access the Internet. But the reality is according to the user, Smartfren is like the common provider, it’s even slow. Maybe it depends on the place as well, because it needs signal too.
So, the conclusion is the jingle and the reality isn’t same. Smartfren isn’t as fast as it says.

6.       TELKOM
“The Word in Your Hand”
Telkom is the first provider in Indonesia and now Telkom enteres the global era with new portofolio of Telecommunication, information, media, and edutainment (T.I.M.E)
So Telkom can bring you to the global era and life becomes easier and it feels like the word in your hand.
The strengths of Telkom are :
1st Use home telephone, there is no trouble signal,
2nd To call through countries, we just push 007+code area+number
3rd For business, you can do Telecomference with all of your partners in the same time,
4th and for handphone, Telkom has created Flexi.

7.       FLEXI
“Bukan Telepon Biasa”
It means it’s not same as the common provider. The strengths are :
If we want to call to the same provider it’s free, and if we call around Indonesia it costs use IDR 49/min. for texting, it costs us for IDR 75.
We do Telecomference to 200 numbers and we can send text to 1000 numbers in the same time through PC Internet. It’s more efficient and easy to used.
The conclusion is the jingle is honest about the product, but the user is not as many as other providers. And usually the user is adult.

8.       SAMSUNG
“Next It’s What ?”
The concept behind the campaign is to communicate Samsung’s continous effort of bringing the “Next” in technology for end comsumers to give the best to cunsumers. And many people use Samsung cellphone because it’s various shapes and fonts.

9.       FREN.
“Tak Ada Repot.”
It means it doesn’t need many requirements to call to other providers. So if you use Fren, it won’t make you difficult.

10.   ESIA
"Telepon Putus Kami Ganti"
It means if there's a drop call because the signals they will change. But just up to five hundred and which is mean ESIA has a bad signal.
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Vocabulary

American          VS         British   

TRASH                                                                                                  RUBBISH
                          
DRUG STORE                                                                                         CHEMIST
   
TRASH CANS                                                                                         BINS

DIAPERS                                                                                               NAPPYS

PANTS                                                                                                   TROUSERS

FLASHLIGHTS                                                                                      TORCHES

ANTENNAS                                                                                          AERIALS

FAUCET                                                                                                 TAP

FALL                                                                                                      AUTUMN

PANTYHOSE                                                                                        TIGHTS

BILLS                                                                                                     BANK NOTES

UNDERSHIRTS                                                                                     VESTS

COOKIES                                                                                              BISCUITS

STROLLERS                                                                                          PUSHCHAIRS

JANITORS                                                                                            CARETAKERS

SUBWAY                                                                                      UNDERGROUND RAILWAY

FRIES                                                                                                    CHIPS

SCHEDULE                                                                                            TIMETABLE

CHIPS                                                                                                    CRISPS

PURSE                                                                                                   HANDBAG

MOVIES                                                                                                 CINEMA

THUMBTACKS                                                                                     DRAWING PINS

YARDS                                                                                                  CARDENS

SWEATERS                                                                                           JUMPERS

TRUCKS                                                                                               LORRYS

HIGHWAYS                                                                                          MOTORWAYS

CLOSETS                                                                                              WARDROBE

CABINETS                                                                                             CUPBOARDS

APPARTMENTS                                                                                    FLATS

CABS                                                                                                     TAXIS

CANDY                                                                                                 SWEETS

GAS                                                                                                        PETROL

BANGS                                                                                                  FRINGE
  
MAILMAN                                                                                            POSTMAN


Jumat, 14 Oktober 2011

BISAKAH BAHASA INDONESIA MENJADI BAHASA ILMIAH ? ? ?

Pertama kali saya mendengar pertanyaan itu, hal yang ada di pikiran saya adalah hal yang konyol atau tidak masuk akal. Kenapa harus ada pertanyaan seperti itu yang harus dibahas?
Sepertinya hanya untuk membuang-buang waktu untuk kita berfikir "BISA GAK YA?" :)
Hmm... tapi sepertinya pertanyaan ini cukup menarik. Karna banyak sekali teman saya yang ikut terus membicarakan soal ini dan mungkin butuh waktu lama untuk menjawabnya..
Sebenarnya simple untuk menjawabnya hanya butuh jawaban Bisa/Tidak, tapi yang sulit adalah untuk menerangkan opini kita tersebut.


Setelah berbasa-basi di atas, saya akan memberi jawaban saya sendiri tentang pertanyaan tersebut
"Bisakah Bahasa indonesia menjadi Bahasa Ilmiah?"
Tidak Bisa !
Karna Bahasa Indonesia sebenarnya merupakan bahasa serapan dari berbagai macam bahasa asing.
Misalnya :
Deskripsi berasal dari Bahasa Inggris yaitu Deskription
Ide berasal dari Bahasa Inggris Idea


Dan alasan yang kedua yaitu karna menurut saya Bahasa Indonesia belum cukup Mendunia, jadi sangat kecil kemungkinannya untuk bisa dijadikan bahasa ilmiah.
Tetapi saya tetap mempunyai rasa keinginan atau harapan kalau bahasa kita ini dapat dijadikan Bahasa Ilmiah, karna Bahasa Indonesia mempunyai banyak ragam bahasa sesuai dengan budaya atau adat yang kita miliki dan sekarang bahasa kita sudah banyak diminati di oleh orang asing, di luar negeri sudah ada sekolah-sekolah yang menambahkan bahasa kita sebagai salah satu materi untuk pembelajaran. Contohnya di Sydney-Australia.

Minggu, 02 Oktober 2011

Look at me from the inside and find something valuable

Don't see me from the outside
I am not phsycally perfect girl
Usually people who don't know me, think I am the Conceited Girls
but look at me from the inside, because I'll be the second sense for you :)


# I'll be your eyes when you are hard to see
# I'll be your mouth when you are difficult to stay
# I'll be your ears when you are difficult to hear something that is intended for you
# I'll be your hands when you are difficult to touch or put something
# I'll be your feet when you are weak or difficult to walk
# I'll be your heart to feel your pain, and I'll be standing right next to you when you are glad

So... LOOK AT ME FROM THE INSIDE and FIND SOMETHING VALUABLE
it's The Best Friend Now, Tomorrow, and Forever.

Life Is Learning

Life is learning

Learn to understand although you're not accord

Learn to thankful although you're poverty

Learn to sincere although you're not willingly

Learn to be patient although you're not strong

Learn to introspection although you're not wrong

So.. keep learning to stay on the right way
and learn to be the best from the best